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    Sequence Shots..

    I used the camera function to take some shots consecutively. I took a lot of such sequence shots, and there sure are more fun pictures I took, which I'll upload next time..

    Anyways, I'd like to share what I've taken.

    Your feedback'd be always much appreciated

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    Re: Sequence Shots..

    I love pictures that tell a story like this. It would have been nice to capture a different angle to see the little boys face? But then as I look closer, and maybe this means I've been in aircraft maintenance but the little boy is pointing with his middle finger! Maybe only I'd notice it, but I did see it right away so I might try a crop using the rule of thirds? Putting the little girls in the far right. Just my two cents.
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    Re: Sequence Shots..

    These show something happening better than the other one you posted.
    The little boy didn't move much and I wish he had. I also wonder why he's giving the finger and once I noticed I can't focus on anything else.
    Do you have the sequence right? If you do the red car behind the fence on left is backing up.
    Keep Shooting!

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    Re: Sequence Shots..

    I also want to add the suggestion to add less depth of field next time, a background like this is just way too distracting.

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    Re: Sequence Shots..

    Thank you guys for your feedback.

    I think this attempt of mine to take some sequence shots turned out to be more like a total failure. When I took them, I thought it'd be cool and fun.. Now when I look at them again in this post after several days.. I just couldn't agree more with you guys myself.

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