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    Self Portrait

    This is a self portrait that I did today.

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    Re: Self Portrait

    Nicely done

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    Re: Self Portrait

    I feel privileged from a guy who is a self portrait guru.
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    Re: Self Portrait

    The only thing this photo needs is a Canon in your hands ;)

    Great self portrait!
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    Re: Self Portrait

    Quote Originally Posted by rylan
    The only thing this photo needs is a Canon in your hands ;)

    Great self portrait!
    Yea but I like my Sony
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    Re: Self Portrait

    Quote Originally Posted by rylan
    The only thing this photo needs is a Canon in your hands ;)

    Great self portrait!
    Quote Originally Posted by kobrien4
    Yea but I like my Sony
    See you both are wrong....Nikon

    Nice portrait:thumbsup:

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    Re: Self Portrait

    Haha I played with a Sony Dslr before, Actually a really nice machine!
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    Re: Self Portrait

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    Haha I played with a Sony Dslr before, Actually a really nice machine!
    Yea I love my 350 it takes great pictures (when i get the focus right haha)
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    Re: Self Portrait

    Heh, I am doing most of my work with a g11 power shot. It probably shows. But to H with it, it is way usable, and the live view is worth a lot.

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    Re: Self Portrait

    Quote Originally Posted by daq7
    Heh, I am doing most of my work with a g11 power shot. It probably shows. But to H with it, it is way usable, and the live view is worth a lot.
    Yea I love the live view on my Sony A350. Especially having a 5 month old son who is on the ground. I just put the camera in live view and flip up the view finder and viola I can take pictures without getting on the floor.
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    Re: Self Portrait

    What about flipping it so the image isn't mirror reversed anymore. I have Photoshop CS4 and there is a menu option under image>image rotation>flip canvas horizontal. If I remember right, it is the same in PS Elements. That way, the viewer doesn't focus on the reversed writing on "Sony"

    I like the way you've done the mirror trick without obscuring your face, as is often the case.

    Thanks for sharing. I have some photos of my own up for critique, should you care to comment.

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    Re: Self Portrait

    hmm never thought about flipping it. I may have to do that
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    Re: Self Portrait

    Heres the flipped version.

    Last edited by kobrien4; 02-17-2010 at 07:34 AM.
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    Re: Self Portrait

    very nice selfer,
    good job at focusing your face, and nice light

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    Re: Self Portrait

    Very good, and it looks better flipped. i like the texture in the bg. Some haloing around you, but it does not hurt in this way here.
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    Re: Self Portrait

    I prefer the first with the YNOS. As soon as my brain sees it as unreadable, it disappears. When I can read it, I keep looking at it.

    Better yet may be to clone it out. I would still prefer the first with you on the right. My vision flows to the right. In the second, I see you briefly and then flow off the photo to the right. In the first, I flow into your image and then stay a while looking it over. I don't know if this is a general perception by most people or just me.

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    Re: Self Portrait

    Well I didn't know the first looked different as it must have been replaced by the second.
    I like it fine but would like to see more room on the left,(or right). A bit tight to frame right now.
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    Re: Self Portrait

    I guess when i flipped it in photo bucket it switched them both. sorry. Thanks for all the comments.
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    Re: Self Portrait

    Like it a lot. Interesting texture in the bg.

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    Re: Self Portrait

    I think is a great shot...its never too easy to do self-portraits for one reason or another, but this works. Personally the choped hand does not aid to the general idea (nit pick).

    I like a lot what you did with the PP work, the tones and the BG is cool. Just a pointer...try to avoid the "halos" like the one over your head...that jumps to the eye and screams "PPwork".
    Also I think this could be a little improved by adding a tad more contrast and definition to boost a little the shadows and the skin.
    Nice shot :thumbsup:

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