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The selective color works well here, but I think if you're going to keep such a narrow DoF you could improve the strength of the photo by going with a square crop. The mouse really does nothing to add to the photo, so it doesn't need to be there in my opinion. This might also work better with a small bump to the overall brightness so the surgeon general's warning "pops".
I agree about the softness of this shot loses its potential effectiveness. Also the red being way off to the side doesn't help it. i like the concept though.
Liban
"There is nothing like returning to a place that remains unchanged to find the ways in which you yourself have." Nelson Mandela
thanks guys, this was actually taken because I really wanted to shoot, but it was like 4 degrees outside and snowing.
I aprecciate the help though. Sadly, I tend to find myself always underexposing everything with wide open aperture. I think I might reshoot this completely, and see what else I can come up with.