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Thread: Schools Out

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    Schools Out

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    Re: Schools Out

    Umm...absolutely nothing to critique...the only thing I can say is I love it. Everything about it, lighting, composition, pp, everything.
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    Re: Schools Out

    I love it and because of it is so good I'm going to be ultra ultra picky - hope you don't mind.

    1. the right side of the picture seems a little soft on the uprights by the pipes
    2. the paper by the desk leg should have been moved either out of the picture completely or preferably to a more prominent position under the desk.

    Just my opinion and I am being super picky because it is so so so good.

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    Re: Schools Out

    Wow, nice place, the light and mood is great, not sure if a tighter crop taking out some space to the left would work or increasing the shadow drop impact on the wall stemming from the window. As a nit pick, the table looks like it's the wrong way around as there are no draws on the compartment??? Great shot though wish it was mine.
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    Re: Schools Out

    Another nice work of art VM. This one may be a little softer than your past ones (the softness on the wall looks good, but the desk legs are also that way). It may have also been better w/ a little more space at the bottom. Anyway, good show, as always.
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