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Good subject, but yeah the tops of their heads clipped off is bad. They are over-sharpened (again), IMO. Too much clutter in the background in # 1. # 2 is better, but perhaps a bit centered. I like the flag on the bottom there.
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I actually like the top one better than the bottom which looks washed out to me. Yes #1 has a cluttered background but that does give it a sense of place.
Going for some major distortion with a wide angle there?
Its a scarecrow. Good subject. I think what's lacking for that oomph factor is composition. HDR? Bluer sky? Not cutting off the head? Black and white? Shadows? These are all things to think about when framing and pushing that trigger.
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