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    Santa Monica Pier, Los Angeles

    Comments always welcome. Thanks.
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    Re: Santa Monica Pier, Los Angeles

    Wow. That's great. I love it.

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    Re: Santa Monica Pier, Los Angeles

    Thanks Greg
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    Re: Santa Monica Pier, Los Angeles

    Eric, my first impression is that this image is too flat. For as much sky as you are emphasizing, I'm wishing for more texture/detail to be visible in the clouds. Or some dramatic light rays from the sky. Something along those lines.

    I don't know how far away this pier is for you, but I would definitely be watching the evening sky for other opportunities to present itself.

    Keep workin' it :thumbsup:
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    Re: Santa Monica Pier, Los Angeles

    Quote Originally Posted by Loupey
    Eric, my first impression is that this image is too flat. For as much sky as you are emphasizing, I'm wishing for more texture/detail to be visible in the clouds. Or some dramatic light rays from the sky. Something along those lines.

    I don't know how far away this pier is for you, but I would definitely be watching the evening sky for other opportunities to present itself.

    Keep workin' it :thumbsup:
    Maybe I'll burn in the clouds more to see how that looks. Thanks.
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