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Don, I love this continued series from the bus window. It really is amazing what all we can miss when we aren't aware. The top is by far the better shot, to me it is just so real with the colors of the building and the girl just sticking out like a sore thumb against it as a backdrop.
Nice job
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The first is a very good example of how colour or the lack of it can make or break a photograph (in this case makes) and the second looks like it is a perfect example of how a safety patrol girl should be in better control.
I have a total lack of respect for anything connected with society, except that which makes the roads safer, the beer stronger, the food cheaper, and the old men and old women warmer in the winter and happier in the summer. Brendan Behan
Great sharpness and color in the first image. I also think the composition is really nice and I always like images that have just a few elements. (I do think it does need just a slight straightening to the right).