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Poor puppy, I would look sad too if my world seemed so flat and grey. Since you have asked for adjustments I have done a few.
-Overall Contrast Adjustment
-Selected the eyes and lightened
-Levels adjustment to brighten the scene
-Crop for balance
You have some nice bokeh going on in the background that blends well with the fuzziness of the dog. Next time you might take advantage of that by composing vertically instead of head on with a horizontal frame which might make the composition feel less awkward.
thanks for your help. She is over due for a bath. when we bath her she is snow white. For those wondering she is a Great Pyrenees and golden retriever mix.She is all white but has a tan stripe down her back
D700
85mm 1.8 D
24-70 2.8 ED
70-200 2.8 ED VRII
2xSB900
Elinchrom Ranger RX 1100watt heads.