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    Running Deer

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    I'm thinking that the dark, snow-less strip at the top is a bit distracting. And the pole above her head is a bit too noticeable.
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    Re: Running Deer

    Yeah, but you've been posting some great ones in the Nature forum!

    I agree with you that the pole is a problem. I like the rest of the top though, but you might think about cropping or pp that dark circle on the R. Your timing was great. It looks like you didn't get a whole lot of time to get a shot off. The one thing that does bother me is that there is no shadow or detail underneath especially her front legs. She looks like she's floating a bit. Nevertheless, it's a good capture
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    Re: Running Deer

    i agree the dark top is fine... and needed. the pole is distracting though.
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