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Thread: Rude Awakening

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    Rude Awakening

    Picture was taken just after a heavy down pour ...
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    Re: Rude Awakening

    Quote Originally Posted by juzzus
    Picture was taken just after a heavy down pour ...
    Hello Juzzus,

    Your picture seems oversharpenned. This technical consideration aside, I think that this is a beautiful photograph. I like the colors and how you composed it.

    Seb

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    Re: Rude Awakening

    Just wondering if a similar opportunity was available for a horizontal version.
    It's a great shot either way. Excellent composition with a lot to look at. Seb may well be right about the sharpening or perhaps a little too much contrast.
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    Re: Rude Awakening

    I like this shot. The colors are great, and the subject is interesting.

    Interesting shot,

    Jared

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    Re: Rude Awakening

    Hi JZ,

    I like how you have included the complementary colors of blue and orange here. But, I'm with OB here. I think the shot may benefit from a wider crop (if available). Also though difficult to get a good exposure across the spectrum, detail does seem to be lost in the highlights. Maybe a little curves adjustment (or less contrast) in PP would help this.

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