round and round

[racedraper]

I went to the playground with my kids and was practicing blurring motion tell me what you think and how to improve.

[SmartWombat]

Just a little wider angle, or further back.
So the light on the right and the foot at the bottom aren't clipped.

[agtaylor]

Would agree with Paul there but I like the shot. The girls face in the background caught my attention. Seems way too peaceful/serene for the shot/environment. Kinda cool contrast.

[MB1]

I'd crop in from the right up to their bodies and crop down from the top too. You have a nice blur there. There are lot of things you could do here with saturation and exposure to get a real abstract look.

I'd say this is a nice enough image and a great start on getting a really good image. Just keep shooting.

[racedraper]

here is another shot. so it would be better to get the entire merry go round in the shot?
Thanks alot guys, my kids will be mad cause we will have to make another trip to the park

[SmartWombat]

I think the first one (where's it gone?) was better.
More faces, closer to the action.
This looks a but too far away.

I don't think you need the whole thing in, no.