Rooky Post

[PrevailingConditions]

Hello all,

I've been lurking for a while and finally decided that if I wanted to get better I needed some knowledgeable feedback. Here's a couple shots from a few months back, but I like them. What can I do to improve?

Thanks!

http://farm1.static.flickr.com/201/4...4f418247_o.jpg
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/187/4...5fad3581_o.jpg

[HowLowCanYaGo]

Hey there, welcome. I've been lurking myself for quite sometime as well.

#1 is definitely the better. I think I like the multiple subjects. The fog in the background doesn't reveal anything and it makes it somewhat spooky (without giving credit to b/w).

[PrevailingConditions]

Thanks. How do I get the pictures to show up without the link?

[Greg McCary]

Thanks. How do I get the pictures to show up without the link?

Welcome to the forums. You can just uplaod the pictures when you post with the link at the bottom of the page.
As for the picture, the composition is fine but your subjects seem to far away and it is to dark. Thanks for posting.
Greg

[Frog]

I like the gray misty exposure.
If they were mine I would flip them horizontally as it gives the viewers eye an easier left to right movement.

[PrevailingConditions]

Something like this? (Lightened & Flipped)