Rockpool

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  • 05-25-2006, 04:14 PM
    yogestee
    Rockpool
    Any takers??


    Canon350D/Tamron 14mm f2.8
    200th@f14
    400ISO

    Jurgen
    Australia
  • 05-25-2006, 04:15 PM
    yogestee
    1 Attachment(s)
    Re: Rockpool
    Do'h..forgot to attach image..Any takers??


    Canon350D/Tamron 14mm f2.8
    200th@f14
    400ISO

    Jurgen
    Australia
  • 05-25-2006, 07:21 PM
    Loupey
    Re: Rockpool
    Hey, Jurgen

    You know I stared at this picture for about 2 minutes trying to think of some useful feedback. Aside from the fact that it is a little "hot" (but it was a bright day and I can appreciate that), I can't put my finger on it. It's pretty and nice but I can't get a story to form in my mind. Maybe there is too much foreground? Other than to create depth, does the foreground relate to the bird?

    Sorry I can't be more specific. Hope you understand.
  • 05-25-2006, 11:01 PM
    yogestee
    Re: Rockpool
    Nah Loupey,,the pelican was just sitting there..

    Jurgen
    Australia
  • 05-26-2006, 02:06 AM
    ajbird
    Re: Rockpool
    I think an hdr composition would have allowed more details in the sky which would have finished off a nice shot
  • 05-26-2006, 05:44 AM
    Ronnoco
    Re: Rockpool
    Loupey pointed out the compositional problems well. From the technical side, I would have either replaced the sky or toned it down and experimented with a polarizer plug-in for photoshop. Selectively bringing up some of the lost detail in the dark rocky areas would help a little too.

    On the other hand, your decision on technical fixes must be based on whether you think that it is worth the time and effort.

    Ronnoco