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Rockpool
Any takers??
Canon350D/Tamron 14mm f2.8
200th@f14
400ISO
Jurgen
Australia
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Re: Rockpool
Do'h..forgot to attach image..Any takers??
Canon350D/Tamron 14mm f2.8
200th@f14
400ISO
Jurgen
Australia
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Re: Rockpool
Hey, Jurgen
You know I stared at this picture for about 2 minutes trying to think of some useful feedback. Aside from the fact that it is a little "hot" (but it was a bright day and I can appreciate that), I can't put my finger on it. It's pretty and nice but I can't get a story to form in my mind. Maybe there is too much foreground? Other than to create depth, does the foreground relate to the bird?
Sorry I can't be more specific. Hope you understand.
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Re: Rockpool
Nah Loupey,,the pelican was just sitting there..
Jurgen
Australia
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Re: Rockpool
I think an hdr composition would have allowed more details in the sky which would have finished off a nice shot
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Re: Rockpool
Loupey pointed out the compositional problems well. From the technical side, I would have either replaced the sky or toned it down and experimented with a polarizer plug-in for photoshop. Selectively bringing up some of the lost detail in the dark rocky areas would help a little too.
On the other hand, your decision on technical fixes must be based on whether you think that it is worth the time and effort.
Ronnoco
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