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Thread: On the road

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    On the road

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    Re: On the road

    Sorry about the tiny uploads! Trying to figure that out...

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    Re: On the road

    Yeah, bigger would be better for sure.
    I like the shadows, and the selective color seems to work pretty well. It's hard to tell but I think it might be slightly crooked, leaning to the right.
    I find the framing a little tight and I think it would be better if the girl's feet were in the frame.

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    Re: On the road

    I agree feet in from would be better, maybe a lower camera angle also.
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    Re: On the road

    I really like the concept. I would try to get/crop in a little closer to emphasize them and the shadows a bit more.

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