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Here is one more from yesterday. The sunset on the ride home.
"There are many paths to the top of the mountain, but only one view"
"You can't depend on your eyes when your imagination is out of focus".
"Whenever man comes up with a better mousetrap, nature immediately comes up with a better mouse."
Some nice color but quite dark on my monitor. Also, I think that the clouds would be level.
And welcome to the site since I forgot on the 'river' shot.
TF
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I am no better than you. I critique to teach myself to see.
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Sony/Minolta - way more gear than talent.
Nice color and the bending road leads the eye nicely.
I agree that it is too dark and not level.
Tripod? Could have done a longer exposure with one and got some detail in the foreground.
Very nice color,flow.
This is an exmple were a graduated ND filter would have helped.
Welcome to PR, I see you live in Forest Hill,ca...I lived in Auburn for 4 years, that is some beautiful country up there.
Here is a quick edit.I lightened the shadow areas, leveled.
Thanks for that Rick. That does look better. Speaking of Auburn. I was out shooting pictures all day of the Auburn Fire. I will post them up later.
Darin
"There are many paths to the top of the mountain, but only one view"
"You can't depend on your eyes when your imagination is out of focus".
"Whenever man comes up with a better mousetrap, nature immediately comes up with a better mouse."
I think just level up the original, my laptop is profiled* and it looks great apart from the slight lean.
(*) You know how the contrast changes as you tilt the screen?
I have one of those built in video conferencing cameras and if I can see my eye reflected in the plastic over the front of it, I know I'm at a consistent viewing angle.