ReTIREd

**swmdrayfan** · 12-08-2006, 07:38 AM

Found these outside my brother-in-law's barn.
John

**jbaldocchi** · 12-08-2006, 02:38 PM

Looks like the've lost there show room shine to me! What about trying this image as a B & W?

Jim B.

**CLKunst** · 12-09-2006, 12:39 PM

Interesting composition John. I'm not quite sure what I think about it yet though. I'm going to mull it over and come back to this one.

**Mr Yuck** · 12-09-2006, 02:46 PM

That's cool. Great composition, I would play with the colors a bit, but dont lose them completely, the brick wall is a little strong.

**gahspidy** · 12-10-2006, 12:04 AM

John, this is good. I like the colors in this and would not suggest removing them. I think maybe getting this more symetrical by cropping a bit off the right side so the area where the tires mee are in the center and there is equal amount of space from the side frame to the inner tire on both sides.