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I understand why you took this picture, but it does not seem to have a subject. It is somewhat confusing to me. It would help if you add the train to the image. What is it that you are trying to say with this image? I am not able to get it.
Thanks for looking. It's an abstract with two perspectives the sidewalk and the rails as well as the powerlines narrowing into distance. I also has a somber atmosphere that comes from the moisture filled sky and the melting snow. I just thought it looked interesting.
I like the sets of converging lines on the left side of the frame. That works pretty well for me and I see the start of an additional set on the right which balances the image without being complete.