Red & Yellow

[arne saknussen]

A train on a sunny day. I was attracted to the colors.

[llewpics]

For some reason, as an abstract, I would crop 20% off the bottom, so it was even harder to tell that it was a train. Otherwise, I like the colors as well.

[Adamo]

I'm not sure I would have known it was a train if you didn't say something. I like the colors and pattern, I wouldn't change that. It just seems the yellow is a little blown out to me. Might be my monitor! The rivet on the bottom kind of stands out to me, Maybe cropping that out and tilting the image so the lines are more vertical? Great shot though.

[arne saknussen]

I'm not sure I would have known it was a train if you didn't say something. I like the colors and pattern, I wouldn't change that. It just seems the yellow is a little blown out to me. Might be my monitor! The rivet on the bottom kind of stands out to me, Maybe cropping that out and tilting the image so the lines are more vertical? Great shot though.

I did those things in the redux.