Raining...bored

[Emo]

I know theres a lot wrong with it...it ws a quick quick shot seeings as i don't want my poor camera to die of rain.

Ash

[dadas115]

I am not sure what to say to make this one interesting. I know the bored feeling. With it getting dark so early these days I can’t go out shooting after work and I am now going through withdrawal. On this one I like the splashes of the raindrops and how everything is nice and shiny from the water. I think it would be better if you cut the top off so the edge of the concrete wasn’t showing and I also would like to see it cropped on one side so the paper isn’t so centered. I would also like the paper to be crumpled more and for the words not to be so close to parallel.

Greg

[Outdoorsman]

I know theres a lot wrong with it...it ws a quick quick shot seeings as i don't want my poor camera to die of rain.

Ash

Another note... this one is much simpler than the "I f___ing love you" one. And so it moves me in a much more melancholy way. The other was very serious, with a suggestion of suicide. This one is more despondent. It immediately takes me down a notch emotionally. Makes me think of times when I had really hurt someone and felt so terrible, so ashamed about it. I just wanted to hide in the darkest part of the house and whimper for a while.
I don't think there's much wrong with it. Maybe a slight exposure adjustment would give it a different look. But I like it just fine the way it is, except I might like to see the ink running a little bit.
I like this series of handwritten note images. Keep 'em coming!