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    radio flyer

    Shot this in the spring, decided to play with it last night and throw it up here.
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    Re: radio flyer

    Really quite nice. A bit hot on the tone map texture. It works, but you could have more subtle luminousity.

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    Re: radio flyer

    pop art. Interesting

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    Re: radio flyer

    Quote Originally Posted by daq7
    Really quite nice. A bit hot on the tone map texture. It works, but you could have more subtle luminousity.
    No tone mapping to it, not on my part anyway. Lensbaby and photoygraphy #2 filter in filter forge.
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    Re: radio flyer

    I like it in general, but it needs something more. Try a dark vignette or another effect. Clever use of text but I wish it said something a little deeper (?)

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