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Thread: The race track

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    The race track

    Shot this with Kodak film BW400 professional and Pentax K1OOO
    cc welcomed

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    Re: The race track

    Javier,
    I like the way everything converges at a distant point in the shot, but not having used the type of film you shot with, I'm not sure if the noise is intentional or not. Still...I like it.
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    Re: The race track

    John,
    Thanks for the cc. It means allot to me. As for the noise or film grain or what ever the right term is, I was not after that.. The photo is as it came out of the camera. I had considered removing the noise, but felt is added an old look to it. I will see what I can do with the image and remove some of that noise..
    Thanks a bunch.
    Last edited by jgredline; 04-21-2008 at 11:53 AM.
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    Re: The race track

    Well, then. I'd stay with the noise, if you like that 'old' feel to it. Sometimes you like to have that 'retro' look to a photo...gives it charactor.:thumbsup:
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