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Thread: rabbit live.

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    lost in the plot.
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    rabbit live.

    this was shot about two years ago for my friends band, year of the rabbit.
    this is one of my favorite shots...but im curious, do you think there is anything i could have done to make this better?
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    erin r.

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    Re: rabbit live.

    I'd crop it out just right where the persons arm is on the right. Just so you still have the cymbal in it from the drums. Your black and white stuff is pretty great, nice harsh contrasts and they work well. It's a tad noisy, but probably because of the poor lighting. The crop would be my only recommendation.

    Nice shooting,

    Jared

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    Re: rabbit live.

    thank you. with my switch to digital slr i havent been doing as much black and white shooting, which was always my signature. i miss my tmax. $$. oh well.

    yes, i wasnt sure about the crop as well. the only reason i kept it in was because it was then the entire band in the shot. but again, i was on the fence about that. i'll give that a try. thank you.
    erin r.

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