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Canon EOS 350D Canon EF 28-200mm f/3.5-5.6 USM
Sigma 30mm f/1.4 EX DC HSM
Sigma 18-50mm f/3.5-5.6 DC
Sigma 70-300mm f/4-5.6 DG
Canon 50mm f/1.8 II
Canon Speedlight 430EX
Great moment. I like your framing/crop. the ear cut off may have bothered some, but I think it works. The lighting on the hair is very good, but i wish there was some of that light reflected up into her face and eye a bit. you might have some good results dodging some highlight into the eyes and lighting up the face a bit..
nice work here.
Hi,
I like the composition a lot. The blurring background is also wise. The tone seems to be a bit toward red as shown on the towel. Like Rcik said, the mood is priceless. thanks for sharing.
yoyo
I can definitely see the red tone.... now. I'll try tweaking it a bit.
Canon EOS 350D Canon EF 28-200mm f/3.5-5.6 USM
Sigma 30mm f/1.4 EX DC HSM
Sigma 18-50mm f/3.5-5.6 DC
Sigma 70-300mm f/4-5.6 DG
Canon 50mm f/1.8 II
Canon Speedlight 430EX
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I'll try tweaking it a bit.
