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I like the concept, however I think my eye wants to wander off to the upper right ...perhaps a little bit of a vignette may draw the eye in to the center? Also, I would think about using something to add some contrast / punch to the photo - more contrast, stronger colors ...or a single shot pseudo HDR to do some light tone mapping ....