Pure morning

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  • 01-23-2005, 03:16 PM
    Mr. Churchyard
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    Pure morning
    Ready to get critics :)
  • 01-23-2005, 04:47 PM
    Dzerzhinski46
    Re: Pure morning
    I like the use of selective focus and softening effect. A very ethereal kind of portrait. I guess this is what you meant by Pure morning. Good work!

    Dzerzhinski
  • 01-24-2005, 06:04 AM
    natatbeach
    Re: Pure morning
    I like the framing of this shot a lot and I like the use of diffusion here. The colors (blues and oranges and yellows) are very soothing. thumbs up well done...great feeling almost like an old photo.
  • 01-24-2005, 06:12 AM
    CarbonTerry
    Re: Pure morning
    well done, nice comp.
    Only criticism is that it looks as if the eyes are completely closed. A better feel if you could see some eye IMHO.
  • 01-24-2005, 06:13 AM
    CarbonTerry
    Re: Pure morning
    Are the black "film edges" something that you added?
  • 01-24-2005, 06:56 AM
    Mr. Churchyard
    Re: Pure morning
    Dzerzhinski46: Thanks! "Etherial" is a word that I couldn't find!
    natatbeach: Old photos look much tender than modern ones :) Thank You!
    CarbonTerry: Eyes realy were closed. :) It was one of the last shots of this session, so Nikita (boy on this photo) didn't try to pose. I added "medium format" film edges to this 35mm frame (don't tell anybody :) ;) )