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I usually like all of your images. This one I'm not fond of. I think its the lack of direction it takes me. I'm not sure what the subject is and there is no real awe factor to over come the lack of subject. Are the buldings the subject? Is it a man against the world thing? I would like the two worker people on the right removed for more of an effect on the individual on the left. Jonas
I have to echo the other comments, I want to see this mighty structure stand alone and dominate the tiny figures below, the building to the right breaks the impact slightly, the compsition with the other elements in the shot is strong, not sure if there is much else you could have done without a bulldozer.
Hi Jonas, Thanks for telling me what you think. My initial thinking was to contrast the tall buildings with the tiny men. It does not seem working well. Yes, you are right about the two guys on th right; I have not thought about that.
Hi PT, You are right about the sky and the building on the right. It does distract the tall buildings. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Hi Herriot, Welcome back! Thanks for the comments.