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    A pretty hall way

    Hi folks,
    I took this yesterday at Pasadena city hall. I like path ways and so forth and tried to time the sun light just right. Anyway, cc is greatly appreciated.. Thanks in advance..
    Shot with Canon AE-1, 50 F/1.4 @5.6 with Kodak Gold 200.

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    Re: A pretty hall way

    Very nice composition and lighting. I think the addition on the person works too.
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    Re: A pretty hall way

    Thanks Greg. I was waiting for a prop to walk in for about 30 minutes or so. I was hoping for one of the maintenance guys, but I think she worked better..

    Do the colors seem dull?
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    Re: A pretty hall way

    Colours seem muted, but right.
    It would have been great if she emerged form the dark corridoor at the end of the columns
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    Re: A pretty hall way

    Quote Originally Posted by SmartWombat
    Colours seem muted, but right.
    It would have been great if she emerged form the dark corridoor at the end of the columns
    Thanks Paul.
    I can't seem to wrap myself arounf the colors. As you said they seem right, but boring.
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    Re: A pretty hall way

    Someone emerging from the dark corridor would have been amazing, but the woman seems to be near one of the third's intersections so that works well too.
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    Re: A pretty hall way

    Thanks Nick. I was really hoping for a maintenance man to come walking from the shadow, but he never came..
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    Re: A pretty hall way

    Here is another version of the same basic scene. She almost looks likes she is posing for me.

    Does this one work better?
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    Re: A pretty hall way

    I love both shots. Certainly the second shot displays nice colours, but I don't think the first is too washed out.

    Looking at these makes me appreciate why I shoot film now
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    Re: A pretty hall way

    What lens did you use?

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    Re: A pretty hall way

    Quote Originally Posted by danic
    I love both shots. Certainly the second shot displays nice colours, but I don't think the first is too washed out.

    Looking at these makes me appreciate why I shoot film now
    Thanks Danic. I really like both myself. As for film, I know what you mean. More and more I find myself shooting less digital.



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    What lens did you use?
    For the first shot I used a Canon FD 50 F/1.4 and the second I used a Canon FD 28 F/2.8
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