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I feel a vertical format would have worked better here. Too many distractions as is, and you may also have caught her in a bad (smile) pose.. the other shots seem much stronger. Imo. Nice light for portraiture btw.
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I like how the eyes catch the light but I will go in GB's direction and say that a vertical format might have been more suitable. I don't mind her expression as I don't think that people need to smile all the time but her posture seems a bit strange. I get the impression that she's leaning forward or something.