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    pond

    cc please



    self crit, its really busy..and the branch to the left is horrible
    Brian O' Canon


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    Re: pond

    Brian.

    Well, you've started well with the self critique which is always important.

    My 2cents

    1. loose the log - doesn't add anything and actually breaks up the photo.

    2. Move forward so the branches on the left and right disappear.

    3. Watch for things comming in from above - you have what looks like some dead leaves top left.

    4. The trees in the background are over exposed so watch for this and either take 2 photos exposed for foreground and background or use RAW and use the RAW editor to create 2 images and then merge.

    5. Move position to see if you can get a better position.

    Hope that lot helps.

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    Re: pond

    I have to add, you need more of the pond, more of looking into the pond or different and higher vantage point.
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