Turtle Log

[OldSchool]

Hi all,

I shot this a few months back, and am still not content with it. It was late afternoon with the sun diffused by the fog (Stow Lake, SF Golden Gate Park).

I don't have a long lens. So, I had to crop this some... which gives me latitude in the composition/presentation. Right now, I have it centered. But, I find the flotsam above distracting. I could zoom out with the subject top left and have negative space of the white reflection going down right. I could just leave it alone. Any suggestions?

Many thanks in advance,
Tim