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  • 12-27-2005, 11:23 PM
    Primetyme195
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    please be nice : )
    Well i had to play around with resizeing so well see how it turns out. but thisis the first work im kinda proud of so tell me what you guys think. :)
  • 12-28-2005, 12:11 AM
    Mr Yuck
    Re: please be nice : )
    very nice, the way it seems underexposed enhances the mood, as does the soft focus. Works very well. Is this from film?
  • 12-28-2005, 03:41 AM
    LeeIs
    Re: please be nice : )
    primetime,
    the scene is good, but it's hard to tell out what everything is. This one is seriously grey. The snow isn't white at all, that should be a tell tell sign to you that your shot is off. I would love to see what you saw when you captured this shot. I'm sure it's great.
  • 12-28-2005, 06:18 AM
    Yoyo Szeto
    Re: please be nice : )
    Hi,
    The pic has a feeling of a Chinese painting. I just wish the contrast is a bit higher.
    Nice shot!
    yoyo
  • 12-28-2005, 06:25 AM
    swmdrayfan
    Re: please be nice : )
    In spite of the fact that it is a little dark, I think you did a pretty fair job of composition. The way the scene fades into fog is nicely done. What time of day was this taken?
  • 12-28-2005, 10:21 AM
    juzzus
    Re: please be nice : )
    Personally i would love to see a little more from the lower half of the pic than the grey sky ... Image may be a little too small to tell anything imo ... nonetheless a good effort !
  • 12-28-2005, 12:41 PM
    dbutler
    Re: please be nice : )
    I would like to see it with a greater degree of contrast as well. I think lightening it up a bit, and punching up the contrast might still give you that misty, lost feel but bring out more of what may have attracted you to the shot.
  • 12-28-2005, 01:38 PM
    Primetyme195
    Re: please be nice : )
    Well this is a dark picture to begin with. I know its a little small but I was haveing trouble getting it on the forum. Also i desaturated the picture so maybe that is why the snow is grey. Also it was actually taken at 2pm on a foggy Central Ohio Xmas Afternoon. How ugly eh?

    Also it is digital, Not film
  • 12-28-2005, 09:34 PM
    sweetdeal22
    Re: please be nice : )
    i like the area :D

    do you think maybe you can post the orginal picture before you desaturated it?
  • 12-28-2005, 10:23 PM
    Primetyme195
    Re: please be nice : )
    Since everyone wanted the pic before i did anything to it here it is...should i have kept anything?
  • 12-28-2005, 10:27 PM
    Primetyme195
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    Re: please be nice : )
    hmm well that did not work...lets try again
  • 12-29-2005, 12:33 AM
    Mr Yuck
    Re: please be nice : )
    I really like the way the edited one is grey and dark. The only thing, now that I've seen the original crop, is to move your horizon up a bit, not centered, but bring it up a bit to show more shoreline instead of sky.