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    Playing in Jah's waterfall...

    Thoughts on how to make these shots better?




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    Re: Playing in Jah's waterfall...

    Frame them! In spite of the very nice attraction (for males) at the bottom of the second shot I like the first one much better. I know it does not strictly follow the rule of 1/3 but it has something about it, I am not sure what.
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    Re: Playing in Jah's waterfall...

    I really like the first one, couldn't say what more to do to improve. For me the second is not sharp enough, while this might add a feel, for me it needs more sharpness. Nice shot / concept though
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    Re: Playing in Jah's waterfall...

    Beautiful photos!

    also like the first one better, since it is in focus

    the concept on the second one is great, to me the branch in the foreground being sharp gives the impression the focus was set there by mistake

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    Re: Playing in Jah's waterfall...

    Quote Originally Posted by armando_m
    Beautiful photos!

    also like the first one better, since it is in focus

    the concept on the second one is great, to me the branch in the foreground being sharp gives the impression the focus was set there by mistake
    WHS....I like No2 but I think the focus should be on the subject and not in the first plane branch.

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    Re: Playing in Jah's waterfall...

    I wouldn't mind being there right now. Very nice shots.

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