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    playing with fire

    Hi..
    This shots didn't came out as I want them to but still I'm going to share them...
    Nikon D70/28-85mm AF in macro mode.
    I'll appreciate your comment.


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    Re: playing with fire

    Very interesting series. It might have looked more interesting if the box were oriented the same way all the way through, but that may not have been possible. Good use of color in 2 and 3.

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    Re: playing with fire

    Nice... but were you able to count them as they spilled onto the floor? Oh, no... those were toothpicks, weren't they?
    tink ewe belly mooch

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    Re: playing with fire

    thanks for the comments..

    RS.
    I have no idea of what are you talking about..!! sorry
    cheers
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    Re: playing with fire

    did you try a long exposure then popping a flash at low power at the end once the match is lit?

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    Re: playing with fire

    I think these have potential...especially the last one. I like that the "keep away from children" and the match are pretty much what you see in it, but it's too out of focus, I think. It would work better for me if the match and box were sharper, and the fingers less so.
    I also would be curious as to how these look completely in color.

    Emily

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    Re: playing with fire

    Quote Originally Posted by EastCoastHucker
    thanks for the comments..

    RS.
    I have no idea of what are you talking about..!! sorry
    Maybe . . . Dustin Hoffman in Rainman ?
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    Re: playing with fire

    Quote Originally Posted by livin4lax09
    did you try a long exposure then popping a flash at low power at the end once the match is lit?
    no, the camera was on a tripod and I use the timer, and on the last pi pi pi I match it.
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    Re: playing with fire

    i really like the first one even tho there is no fire its just really clear and looks cool

    jay
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    Re: playing with fire

    Quote Originally Posted by Rivman
    Maybe . . . Dustin Hoffman in Rainman ?
    ...precisely... for some reason, the box of matches reminded me of that...
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