Playing with contrast

[chocolic]

I took some test shots to try for sharp eyes - a common critique problem with my other photos. I really like bumping contrast and playing with color levels for a more artsy feel rather than technically perfect, but I have LOTS to learn and would love some feedback.
Original, then altered photo.

[Frog]

I've found the best way to get sharp eyes is to use spot focus, focus on the eye and hold the focus with a half shutter press, and then compose before clicking.
No comment on your color and contrast above for it is not my style but the eyes aren't sharp.

[chocolic]

Thats how I focus, and this eye is the sharpest of the bunch, so I guess I am SOL for the time being! lol. Thanks!

[gahspidy]

The eye looks sharp, no problem wtih that. I think the original is underexposed and the edited version is too high key and contrasty. I like the compsotion and framing but I think cropping this to an 8X10 format and losing some of the left sid ewould improve. An edit somewhere in between the original and this edit I feel would be best

[chocolic]

Thanks Gary. Ive been playing around with this trying your suggestions but I keep falling asleep!