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    In the Pits 2

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    Re: In the Pits 2

    I like the top photo the best, but it still needs something. Sort of one-dimensional as is. Perhaps a hand getting ready to flick the switch, something like that. The others are very abstract, esp the bottom one. Maybe you could manipulate the colors in PS and get something even better.

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    Re: In the Pits 2

    Thanks for your comments and suggestions. Would you say they are abstract in a good or bad way? like too abstract maybe?
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    Re: In the Pits 2

    Well, #2 could be abstract if you zoomed in and adjusted the colors or related. The last one is a little to boring. I think if you adjust it using a solarization or phychodelic filter that it might be pretty neat thought. #2 would be more challenging, but I see something that that might work. You have PS or Corel PhotoPaint?

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    Re: In the Pits 2

    Here's something i did with #4. Some diffuse glow and unsharp mask.
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