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Thread: pin up style #2

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    wannabe
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    pin up style #2

    I think this my best . straight from the camera adjusted to Sepia dark in lightroom2
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    Re: pin up style #2

    Well done, especially on the technical side. I don't think you could have gotten the sepia look any better. I like her outfit but the angle sort of makes her look heavier than she is on her upper body. I guess I am not a fan of this particular angle (having seen it elsewhere also). The only other minor complaint is the loss of detail in some parts of her that appear to be blown out... Soooooooo hard not to have this happen with digital !!

    The car looks very polished, almost like a toy. Is it legit?
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    Re: pin up style #2

    yup the car is all metal. i used a silver reflector but she is a very pale person i wanted to use gold but would have changed the cats features
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    85mm 1.8 D
    24-70 2.8 ED
    70-200 2.8 ED VRII
    2xSB900
    Elinchrom Ranger RX 1100watt heads.

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    Re: pin up style #2

    Maybe a polarizer filter for the windshield glare? - TF
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