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  1. 04-09-2009, 12:55 PM #1
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    Pilings on a moonlit bay

    Taken off the Sea wall at Viscaya last night, and one of the few I was really happy with...
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  2. 04-09-2009, 01:18 PM #2
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    Re: Pilings on a moonlit bay

    I think it's wonderful, there are a couple of things that could be improved in composition, e.g. separating the top ties from the pier, but that is really nit picking.

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  3. 04-09-2009, 08:01 PM #3
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    Re: Pilings on a moonlit bay

    Thats a beautiful image. Nice job.
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  4. 04-09-2009, 10:24 PM #4
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    Re: Pilings on a moonlit bay

    Hi J,
    I like the colours and the composition. The more I look at the photo, the more philosophical ideas come to my mind. Very good!

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    Re: Pilings on a moonlit bay

    Looks really nice Jetrim. Out of curiosity, did you lighten the pillars in PS or with a torch from the wall?
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  6. 04-10-2009, 03:23 AM #6
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    Re: Pilings on a moonlit bay

    Thanks everyone!
    Danic, the pilings are light due to the shutter being open for 20 sec. There was really very little ambient light except for moonlight.
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  7. 04-10-2009, 06:06 PM #7
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    Re: Pilings on a moonlit bay

    Tricky shot,good job.

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    Re: Pilings on a moonlit bay

    Outstanding capture, A real beauty controlling the light @ 20 seconds.Well done Jet'

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  9. 06-05-2009, 05:05 AM #9
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    Re: Pilings on a moonlit bay

    I like it a lot
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