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    Question A piece of cake ?

    I have been experimenting with a barbie cake my wife baked .
    Was having a difficult time to get the light correct.Any comments would be appreciated .

    james
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    Hmm, these are tough to do. The lighting looks very flat and somewhat dark. Try putting a reflector under her to lose the shadow dark area under her chin and neck area. Also I think a different pose would help as this one looks as if she is being held up at gunpoint.
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    Hi Gary
    Thanks for mentioning the arms ! I did not even notice that ! Unfortunatly the cake isn't anymore ! But i do have something else that i will try moving a reflector around.
    Thanks for your comments.
    Wish more people will leave comments as well.

    Greetings
    james


    Quote Originally Posted by gahspidy
    Hmm, these are tough to do. The lighting looks very flat and somewhat dark. Try putting a reflector under her to lose the shadow dark area under her chin and neck area. Also I think a different pose would help as this one looks as if she is being held up at gunpoint.

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    Thank you Penny for commenting on the picture .
    With a bit of practise i think i will sort out the lightning problems .
    The tilt of the picture is quite distracting . I will work on that as well .Like Gary also mentioned - the arms look like she is held at gunpoint
    Thanks again !

    Greetings
    james

    Quote Originally Posted by prbowhay
    Dear James:

    A Barbie Cake -- how cute is that! Even though the lighting may not have been exactly right what I noticed the most was the tilt of the picture, that distracted me straight away. Your wife is very talented to make such a cute cake -- take some more pictures of her other creations!

    Thanks for sharing this one.

    Best to You,
    Penny

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