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Thread: A piano

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    A piano

    Shot this going down an escalator. Very hard to shoot. I had to play photo gymnastics to get this.
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    Re: A piano

    Love the composition and geometry of it all. It's all flattened out, a 2 dimensional design, is this a crop?

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    Re: A piano

    Thanks F-15
    I did not crop it. It is only resized. Shot with a Pentax FA 50 F/1.4..
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    Re: A piano

    Wild looking shot. If only that (a door, a frame, a ?) wasn't protruding at the bottom. You could PS it out.

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    Re: A piano

    Quote Originally Posted by jgredline
    Thanks F-15
    I did not crop it. It is only resized. Shot with a Pentax FA 50 F/1.4..
    Even better! Oh, I would also like to add that IMO this image would go good untitled. I didnt pay attention to the title and didn't know it was a piano till I later visited(now).

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    Re: A piano

    My only crit is that the corner of the bench and the one leg are cut off.
    Now where did I put that fisheye lens?
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    Re: A piano

    I agree about the legs and bench being cut off, but otherwise it is an interesting shot of a unique subject. too bad there is not a piano player hired to sit up there and play . . .
    i like the golden yellow color in this one.
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    Re: A piano

    I also agree with teh others. The leg sticking out of the frame and also the board hurts the shot. It might be interesting if you cloned the supports.
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    Re: A piano

    Folks
    Thanks a bunch for the comments. I will see if any of the other images I took are any better and I will spend some time with the cloning tool this evening..

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