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    Photos of a friend... (Warning: Semi-Revealing Outfits)

    Some additional photos from a session I did with a friend this weekend. (Original picture posted here: Messing around with a friend this weekend... ) Had a lot of fun doing these pictures. Comments welcome!

    - Aaron
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    Beautiful woman

    Quote Originally Posted by back_packn
    Some additional photos from a session I did with a friend this weekend. (Original picture posted here: Messing around with a friend this weekend... ) Had a lot of fun doing these pictures. Comments welcome!

    - Aaron
    But you have not got the out of her !! If she is still your friend, lol , you both should look at poses in any of her fashion mags and get some inspiration for poses.First is well exposed and she has lovely skin tone but her foot is dominating the shot.Second calls for a prop of some kind just to concentrate the eye. Good shots , give us more.
    Bobby

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    Yes, the foot does bother me in the first shot, but I do still kinda like it. But, yes, the food is way to dominating in the shot. I'm still kinda new to this, so I'm still just experimenting and playing around a little. I appreciate the comments. I think that the shot I posted in the other forum (linked above) is my favoriate from this session.

    - Aaron

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    Here are a couple of more shots from this session...

    - Aaron
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    I am not at all experienced in any way with fashion photography, but my opinion on what I see is that technically all looks ok lighting and framing, but these shots seem to be dated. Like they remind me of stuff I might have seen in the eighties, which is not bad but I think like fashion, fashion photography should be cutting edge or at least up to the latest. But out of the whole bunch, I do like the last one you posted, the one on top, the best. Something about it draws one in, or me in anyway. I think it is that unlike the others, it does not look intentionally posed but rather like you caught her off guard and she is covering up with a smile. And I like the lighter bg with this too. But they are not bad at all.
    please do not edit and repost my photos


    gary


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