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    Pet Asylum

    Rat Snake and Mad Dog; Old wagons on the Irish bogs.
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    Re: Pet Asylum

    Good tones on this photo, however the upper left corner seems to have a blurry spot or slight loss of tone / definition?
    I like the composition and how each train brings you deeper into the photo. I like how each looks like it has been there a while and nature is starting to overtake them...along with some graffiti. Good find.
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    Re: Pet Asylum

    Hi Tom,
    I especially like the clouds in this shot. I just imagine if there is a wandering dog in the scene looking for the right wagon. Thanks for sharing.
    yoyo

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    Re: Pet Asylum

    Nice format. THe black and white works here. A little dark on the left side. I like the clouds a lot here - good catch. The photo could be a little sharper, esp around hte grass and tree branches. As I mentioned, the only part that disturbs me a little is the darkness on the left side. It's like a wild animal is lurking there, waiting to strike

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    Re: Pet Asylum

    like gb1 pointed out, the shadow on the first train is hurting the shot. other then that, good composition.

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    Re: Pet Asylum

    Thanks to you all. I do agree about the dark areas on the left side.
    Perhaps a doggie looking out over the edge of the Rat Snake wagon could be a nice too Yoyo.
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