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    perfil

    want to share this two pics. of my favorite model and girlfriend . ; )
    what you think..!


    Thanks.
    Juanjo

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    Re: perfil

    I think you have a nice model to work with and hope to see more of her. I'm not sure the way these two shots are presented is optimal. The low contrast and odd coloring, while unconventional, doesn't work for me -- they look a bit like Xerox copies right now, rather than eye-catching photographs. Just my $.02. I worry as I write this that I've overstated things. Please take my comments as helpful suggestions from someone who can't necessarily find the right words.

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    Re: perfil

    Juanjo,

    I like the composition in both photographs but the addition of so much noise makes it look like an old newsprint photo. the colouring of the photos I like but the noise is a tad too much as it looks like noise not grain that you get from film.

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