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Fatty23 Perfect 06-11-2007, 10:25 PM
Didache Re: Perfect 06-12-2007, 12:09 AM
Overbeyond Re: Perfect 06-12-2007, 02:59 AM
Alison Re: Perfect 06-12-2007, 03:35 AM
swmdrayfan Re: Perfect 06-12-2007, 05:24 AM
Alison Re: Perfect 06-12-2007, 06:57 AM
Fatty23 Re: Perfect 06-12-2007, 11:04 AM
Xia_Ke Re: Perfect 06-12-2007, 11:16 AM
PrevailingConditions Re: Perfect 06-12-2007, 12:07 PM
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    Grumpy Old Man Overbeyond's Avatar
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    Re: Perfect

    I agree totally with Mikes critique on this.
    Very well done.
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    Re: Perfect

    A beautiful portrait. The exposure is perfect. Great dof, colours and clarity too.

    I agree about the elbow.
    A suggestion might be to have that elbow on the grass next time, with her fingers through her hair. A more relaxed natural looking pose. This may also help the composition, making it possible to have your model off to the left of the frame.

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    Re: Perfect

    Only nitpicks---the elbow, as others have pointed out, and it seems like the sky's a little washed out. Other than those two points, I love it. Great vibrant colors. Nice DOF.

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    Re: Perfect

    I think perfect exposure on the skin is much better than perfect exposure on the sky.
    A way to overcome that is to take two shots. One with the model and one without. And then photoshop your perfect sky in :thumbsup:
    And in any case I think fatty is only using a point and shoot in auto mode so the camera decided what was right.

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