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1. man in wheel chair. this one is very noisy don and the noise doesn't add to ti. it's also way out of focus.
2. guy and girl, The chick here looks like she would've been a great subject for some shots. I understand that you shot this out of the bus so that wasn't possible. It looks to be a bit out of focus. try higher shutter speeds then to freeze your shots then in post production if u shoot Raw u can adjust the exposure and lighten them up that way.
3. chick with weird pose, there's definitely a central focus here but the problem is that they are sandwiched together in the shot. there's so much space in the photo but the only two people are on top of each other :-)
4. yikes. watch out!!! the car is definitely coming this way and this biker is defintely not parked (both feet on the peddles) I hope it ended up well :O I think this could work as an editorial shot in some newspaper about your weather.
5. guy looking through the bag. this one is out of focus and it doesn't do much for me , sorry
6. little girl, this one is somewhat minimalstic and i like these types of shots. The only thing is I wish you would've included her in her entirety without the legs being cut off. I still like it though .
Liban
"There is nothing like returning to a place that remains unchanged to find the ways in which you yourself have." Nelson Mandela
Thanks guys. A lot of my shot arre technically crappy because i take them from moving buses through the window or i grab them fast. I just want to show what I see.
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