Photo Critique Forum

Please post no more than five images a day and respond to as many images as you post. Critics, please be constructive, specific, and nice! Moderated by gahspidy and mtbbrian.
Featured Photo
Photo by hminx

Photo by hminx
Featured Photo Archive >>
By posting on the Photo Critique forum you agree to post only your own photos, be respectful, and give back as much as you receive. This is a moderated forum and anything abusive or off-topic will be removed.
Results 1 to 7 of 7

Thread: peacock costume

  1. #1
    Senior Member payn817's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2005
    Location
    Georgia, usa
    Posts
    2,180

    peacock costume

    from our local cherry blossom festival.
    Attached Thumbnails Attached Thumbnails peacock costume-1pict0143.jpg   peacock costume-pict0170_filtered.jpg  

  2. #2
    is back jar_e's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2005
    Location
    Calgary, Alberta
    Posts
    3,264

    Re: peacock costume

    Great shots and as I said in the VF thread lovely colors. The composition is interesting for the first one, I wish the angle was a little different though, either more frontal or a little more from behind...however, I love how you can see the second "peacock" in the background too!

  3. #3
    mod squad gahspidy's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2004
    Location
    N.Y. U.S.A.
    Posts
    8,368

    Re: peacock costume

    I like your framing on both of these shots. i think they needed to be sharper, and the subject lit and exposed abit better in the second shot.
    please do not edit and repost my photos


    gary


  4. #4
    Junior Member
    Join Date
    Mar 2006
    Location
    Charlotte, NC - USA
    Posts
    25

    Re: peacock costume

    I agree. The colors are great, but the second shot needs to be lightened a bit so the subject's face isn't so dark.
    Live life to the fullest, no death bed regrets baby!

  5. #5
    Love + Music + Photography = Life CLKunst's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2004
    Location
    Asheville, North Carolina, United States
    Posts
    2,035

    Re: peacock costume

    Here is a great opportunity to use a custom white balance selection if you have that option on your camera. Correctly white balancing for a scene like this will sometimes also lighten the scene by making a yellower cast light appear whiter and therefore brighter. Post processing conversions are less successful and can take data out of your image in lightening so it's best to control it as much as you can while you are shooting. At least that's what I do. I really like both of these images but wish that they were sharper. Some of that is probably your moving targets and some is probably blown out highlights. Best solution I've found is practice and try to find more opportunities for experimentation.
    C.L. Kunst - CLicKs Photography
    Asheville Photographer
    www.clicksphotography.net



  6. #6
    Senior Member payn817's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2005
    Location
    Georgia, usa
    Posts
    2,180

    Re: peacock costume

    I have the option to use the temp, and can do a reading from a card. The problem is though, would it work with the lights changing? Practice is definately my intention, along with great tips from all the people here, I can't go wrong.

    P.S. This thread was started in haste and since then most of the photos from the day were rescued.

  7. #7
    Love + Music + Photography = Life CLKunst's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2004
    Location
    Asheville, North Carolina, United States
    Posts
    2,035

    Re: peacock costume

    Quote Originally Posted by payn817
    I have the option to use the temp, and can do a reading from a card. The problem is though, would it work with the lights changing?
    Ha! LOL! Welcome to my world! Yes white balancing is something I do about as much of as checking the focus. It's that imperative in a low light situation because it completely affects your lux. Check your manual and figure out if you can do a custom white balance that is a little more on the fly than having a card. It's not so much about finding true white but about finding white for that particular light. Does that make sense?
    C.L. Kunst - CLicKs Photography
    Asheville Photographer
    www.clicksphotography.net



Thread Information

Users Browsing this Thread

There are currently 1 users browsing this thread. (0 members and 1 guests)

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •