On patrol ,North Shore Hawaii

[griffinsurfboard]

North Shore police on patrol.

[jbaldocchi]

Cool looking vehicles, is there a third wheel or how do they keep their balance? Are they better than bicycles?

Jim B.

[Anbesol]

making cops lazier. what happens when they have to chase a criminal - the criminal will get away!!

[Photo-John]

You guys aren't posting critiques. Please keep this forum on track. Comments about the vehicle are ok, but only if you're also post useful criticism.

The huge space around these photos is making it really hard for me to see them on my computer monitor. It's an uneccesary distraction. I see you're linking to Photobucket. Try using the upload here and upload directly from your computer. That should post them more in-line with the forum and make them easier to view.

As far as the photos go, they're interesting in a news sort of way. But there's nothing happening in them to take them to the next level. The vehicle (I think it's called a Segueway) is what makes them successful. The composition, light, and action aren't that interesting. I might try shooting from a lower angle, shooting with more dramatic lighting, panning for some background blur - something to give them a little more life.

Glad to see you on the forum. I've looked at some of your other stuff but I've been too busy to post. Hope my comments are useful to you. Don't be afraid to tell people that you need advice and not just comments. This forum is for criticism and we have other forums where people can make casual comments.