Passion

[Feggy]

On Sunday i had the chanche to make a shoot with one of my good friendz katy.
she loves to dance (ballet).
so i tried to make some pics of her.

this are the ones i want to show to you. to know what you think about.
(pic+editings all by me)

i just have a Canon Ixus 60 digital camera

[MB1]

They look ok and I like the idea of mixing a dancer with Railroad tracks.

OTOH the images you posted here are just too small to get much more than a general idea of how they are without any chance to see any technical flaws.

[retroactiv]

Click on them to see the full sized images... Ummm, they are a little artsy for my taste but I think it is doing what you are trying to. the one on the tracks is much better than the other one of the person holding the slippers.

[Frog]

I like the person holding the slippers one except that her whole hand should be in the shot.

[hollis]

I like the idea of the dancer on the tracks,
I like the image you have but
I dont like the black tights showing under the pink.
Maybe try one with you standing 45° to the tracks?

Once you have a good idea, keep shooting it til you get something good :thumbsup:

[Greg McCary]

I think I would crop the second one just above the ankles. The bland sky hurts the first. There is not enough contrast between her shirt and the sky.

[Tel]

Stop trying to look like every other shot on DeviantArt, then you might have a shot. (pun intended)

[Feggy]

i dont try to make things just like in devianart. its just my way i do photography.
but thank you all for your tipps i can so learn from it.

thanks a lot.