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Took these out at the Salton Sea last month. C&C welcome.
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the first shot is great.....I guess the only thing that kinda bothers me are the trees on the right-hand top corner....if you could clone or crop that out, that may help . The lighting in the second pic kills it for me. Nice catch on the first photo.....
"The force of art lies in its immediate influence on human psychology and in its active contagiousness."
I like the atmosphere of number 1..I agree that the foreground palms out of focus need to go...looks like a lot of work though to get a natural finish.
I like #2 the best but feel it needs a contrast and saturation boost also clone the houses. The blowing out parts of the sky is a little distracting on the first one.
I am like Barney Fife, I have a gun but Andy makes me keep the bullet in my pocket..
Thanks for commenting fellows. I agree on # 1: it would look cleaner w/o the right side branches, but like you said Rod, that would take a heck of a lot of work and I don't know if I'd ever get it right!
Greg, not sure if that's the answer, but I've tried your suggestions except for the cloning which I can try later. To me, the colors seem Hawaiian. But I'm not sure why (maybe cause they are the same as sliced pineapple?). Here's the edit.
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Thanks, Lori and Rick.. And to think it was taken at one of the nastiest places in California, the Salton Sea
Gb
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