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    A painting with time

    wpg beach shore,very windy day,perfect to try a painting with time,manual settings 3 second exposure,on tripod with the nikon D50.
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    Re: A painting with time

    Ok.........you need to straighten the horizon, eliminate that wild weed in the lower left, and make a levels/contrast adjustment. There's also a small speck in the water near the horizon. I like where you're going with this, though. I'd like to see a cleaned up version.
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    Re: A painting with time

    John said what I was thinking... I think the colors and overall scene have potential, but the technical flaws are immediately noticeable. Looks like it was maybe too windy to try that 3 sec exposure, as the tripod can't control the blur on the foliage.

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    Re: A painting with time

    Neat average motion. Intersting experiment, Gerry.

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