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    Re: Pain

    I find this a bit dark, at least on my monitor, there is no detail at all left in his clothes, the man is the subject and I feel I am straining to see him. The subject is too centered, I would like to see the entire scene shifted up to see more of the background.
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    Re: Pain

    Kaskais - I think the idea of capturing this fellow is probably good, but I think he's too small in the frame here, and his outfit is too dark to see any detail. Try lightening up the darks a bit and see how it looks. The lack of eye contact or his face also hurts the photo, although there is nothing you can do about that now.

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    Re: Pain

    I like the image.Although I agree it is too dark. A little dodging on the figure would help.

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